Enjoyed your gig last night.It’s a big ask for a novice to get up & do 60 mins – well done!
Some constructive feedback- you were funnier when you relaxed and were yourself. Could do with slowing down – more pausing. Also more audience eye conract – not just the person in the back row! I know you wont change it however,I would chuck the power point- you don’t need it although I appreciate you require some kind of prop.The dieing on stage gag did not work for me. Maybe tell more stories – you’re good with stories.(eg ronnie corbett- there’s a whole new audience for his act)Don’t speak negatively about yourself and mean it.Don’t inform the audience – instead, constantly engage their emotions.
You’ll be good in Edinburgh!
Best Brian